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some peek previews of what i used to write...let me know if you like them if i have any potential at all,and if in the future i'm improving.

When

"when odds and probabilities make no sense
when it all becomes too intense
you have to feel yourself become loose
as truths are whispered among lies
as fake acts reveal themselves in disguise
from all things past you've come to realise
pray for those whose hearts you've paralised
when you captured the world through a glance
and found out nothing's circumstance
monthly days have come to pass
when will you have made your choice at last?"


Love or hate
As tears of blood pour from my eyes
I wear my shade i'm in disguise
I fell apart from truth and lies
My love your worth one million tryes

Randomly i walk by you at night
I hear no noise,no words,i see no light
Through things i've gained i've lost so much
I want your lips,your skin,i want your touch.

Just one love, one heart, no moment apart
One truth -more lies,no bounds,no ties
One hope and one kiss,one moment of this
In life and in death,no hope and no rest
In pain and in stress,faith put to the test.



that's about it ,wrote those a couple of weeks back when i was feeling down...yeah women can do that to you:P


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I feel though you have been engineered for my own purpose as a center of my existence because I wished for you,your taste would make a dead man live life and a live man give his life,for a drop of your essence,just for the desire of your skin and the way your body blossoms...

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mejulie
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imi place mult a doua

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Stop being normal,you scare me!

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RoxanaG
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i like that one too

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Viata este mult prea scurta pentru a fi trist, asa ca zambeste! 

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this one's for julie:P

a candle lights with every moonlight beat,
the sound of your silent feet fades away near this bed of satin sheet.
midnight descends in raven coloured clothes,
as god brought me out this fountain of souls
i lay awake and think of you,
i sleep through night as others do,
i close my eyes and dream of you.
no right,words no feelings true,i use to emphasize me feeling blue.
with every take of silent breath,i seek dorment refuge in death.
as empty minds live within fiends,
naked words get lost in mystic winds,
throughout this night feelings endure,
your kiss,your touch,your loving heart is pure.
bound to this day certain things have gone away,
the pulse of love has stayed this day,
i'm not here anymore,i'm drifting away,
to another time,another place,where i might stay.
there are no words to make you understand,
of life, of love, of gods predestined plan,
if you measure my love within a grain of sand,
i'll die, i'll wither away,like no other man,
to you i dedicate this shrine,
to all things living pure that are not mine.

feel free to criticise...i'm not gonna take that well but you should anyway:P   for a person thats not at any art school,or didnt have much contact with literature,maybe you people can change that for me,i think the poem it's ok...might be improving..slow...science and theory is my thing this is just a hobby in the spare time


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I feel though you have been engineered for my own purpose as a center of my existence because I wished for you,your taste would make a dead man live life and a live man give his life,for a drop of your essence,just for the desire of your skin and the way your body blossoms...

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mejulie
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finnaly I'm back,wowe I can't belive this
well pt ca mi-a trimis-o si am citit-o inainte sa o vad pe forum..I wanna thank u andrei again for this beautiful poem.it's breathtaking..and u know that cause I told u


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Stop being normal,you scare me!

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Mrrrr
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So...you showed me yours? I'll show u mine!

                YOU AND ME (2004)
               
Sun is shining, sky is blue
And all I want is be with you.
You're my everything, you're my light,
Looking in your eyes I take my flight...
And I look for the sunshine of my life,
For the girl who's ment to be my wife.
And guess who is that girl? She's you!
You can't belive I love you? I'm tellin' you, I do!
You're the one I really want to be with
Please, pay attention to me a little bit:
I love you more than anything, more than I love myself,
I love you even more than I love life itself,
I love you, just you, nothing else matters,
Everything else around just scatters...
It's just the two of us, just we,
Nothing exists besides just YOU AND ME.


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"Primul pumn dat, prima palma luata, primul scandal,
Prima betie, prima tigara fumata,
Primul sarut, primul Te Iubesc a fost o data,
Dar raman cele dintâi si nu se uita niciodata
"
[Rappa - Nu se uita niciodata]

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smooth

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I feel though you have been engineered for my own purpose as a center of my existence because I wished for you,your taste would make a dead man live life and a live man give his life,for a drop of your essence,just for the desire of your skin and the way your body blossoms...

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